Sentences and punctuation in OpenStack Block Storage

[Joseph Robinson]

Minor edits to the sentence structure, and punctuation.
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Built: 2014-05-31T09:25:02 00:00
git SHA: 039139c87708d58b1da18ca9a9663005d6d95ae3
URL: http://docs.openstack.org/trunk/install-guide/install/apt/content/block-storage-service.html
source File: file:/home/jenkins/workspace/openstack-manuals-tox-doc-publishdocs/doc/common/section_getstart_block-storage.xml
xml:id: block-storage-service

[Matt Kassawara (ionosphere80)]

Should we classify this under the installation guide improvements blueprint?

[Christian Berendt (berendt)]

This bug report does not mention which sentences should be rewritten.

@Joseph: Can you please provide further details or attach a review request to this bug report.

Changing status to "incomplete".

[Joseph Robinson (joseph-r-email)]

 The review for this bug: https://review.openstack.org/#/c/97159/3

The edits to the sentence structure specifically included (by section title and line number):

Changes to the Block Storage introduction content - Lines 6 - 11.

Changes to the sentences about the cinder-api - Lines 17, 18, and 19.

Changes to the sentences on the cinder-volume - Lines 23 - 29.

Changes to the sentences on the cinder-scheduler - Lines 37 and 38.

[Andreas Jaeger (jaegerandi)]

Joseph, next time add a "Closes-Bug:" to your patch, please