Typos in Identity Service concepts in OpenStack Installation Guide for Red Hat Enterprise Linux, CentOS, and Fedora - havana

[Phil Wiffen]

At the bottom right of the diagram on this page, reachable is spelt "reacheable" in the phrase "The server is reacheable here"

I believe there's another typo in the diagram, where the sentence "That token belong to the user Alice" should possibly say "That token belongs to the user Alice"

Also, I think the line "5-Keystone provides extra infos along with token" in the diagram might be incorrect. I think it should say something like "5-Keystone provides extra info along with the token"

Cheers,
Phil Wiffen
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Built: 2014-02-18T19:27:17 00:00
git SHA: 8d94af1f026645734ba96dc66195b0dbe6c96d9c
URL: http://docs.openstack.org/trunk/install-guide/install/yum/content/keystone-concepts.html
source File: file:/home/jenkins/workspace/openstack-install-deploy-guide-fedora/doc/common/section_keystone-concepts.xml
xml:id: keystone-concepts

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/74785

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/74785
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/openstack-manuals/commit/?id=939b1eebe1819529698e65868ecd4b8cdcb4b57b
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit 939b1eebe1819529698e65868ecd4b8cdcb4b57b
Author: Rhys Oxenham <email address hidden>
Date: Wed Feb 19 18:07:23 2014 +0100

    Fixes typos and updates Keystone concepts image

    This patch fixes a number of typos and generally cleans
    up the keystone concepts image in the install-guide.

    Change-Id: I437600288e3ab181668b55493451a0b4ef5dd314
    Closes-Bug: #1281775

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

This issue was fixed in the openstack/openstack-manuals 15.0.0 release.