Awkward use of colon

[Kevin Breit]

Text:

Configure the location of the database. Replace NOVA_DBPASS with your Compute service password:

Edit the /etc/nova/nova.conf file and add these lines to the [database] and [keystone_authtoken] sections:

I am noticing the first section implies there is an example under it but there's nothing showing. It looks like the example for the first line is actually under the second line.
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Built: 2013-12-16T19:06:30 00:00
git SHA: ffcae01fe2e154e4a74fe7afc2a66976dfbf30e7
URL: http://docs.openstack.org/havana/install-guide/install/apt/content/nova-controller.html
source File: file:/home/jenkins/workspace/openstack-install-deploy-guide-ubuntu/doc/install-guide/section_nova-controller.xml
xml:id: nova-controller

[Tom Fifield (fifieldt)]

Thanks for the report Kevin :)

[Kevin Breit (kbreit)]

I noticed the problem on step 7 as well.

[Matt Kassawara (ionosphere80)]

Step 2 needs clarification... probably a side-effect of related fixes.

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/62797

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/62797
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/openstack-manuals/commit/?id=97b251c488601b8ae5cbb0cb2de0daf768b19324
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit 97b251c488601b8ae5cbb0cb2de0daf768b19324
Author: Matt Kassawara <email address hidden>
Date: Tue Dec 17 18:58:15 2013 -0700

    Addressed underlying issues associated with misplaced colon

    Upon further investigation, the 'NOVA_DBPASS' reference in the
    sentence including the misplaced colon should reside with the database
    creation step now located further into this section. The best
    solution probably involves opening another bug to clarify this
    section by reordering several steps. For example, database creation
    seems like a prerequisite for configuring the 'connection' key in
    nova.conf. Additionally, at least in the Ubuntu guide, configuring
    the keys under [keystone_authtoken] in nova.conf should reside with
    the step configuring Compute to use the Identity Service.

    In the meantime, unless suggested otherwise, I changed the minimal
    number of items to remove the misplaced colon and improve clarity
    using the existing sequence of steps.

    Change-Id: I5b24d55f236b6b4cf675707ebce34180187b788e
    Closes-Bug: #1261607

[Matt Kassawara (ionosphere80)]

I suggest backporting this patch to Havana.

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

This issue was fixed in the openstack/openstack-manuals 15.0.0 release.