Generally improve writing in the Cloud Administrator Guide

[Lana]

The writing and grammar in the Cloud Administrator Guide needs general improvement.

http://docs.openstack.org/admin-guide-cloud/content/

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/57109

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/57109
Committed: http://github.com/openstack/openstack-manuals/commit/df8517ffed656989340a685b0c866ded7b808ef7
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit df8517ffed656989340a685b0c866ded7b808ef7
Author: loquacity <email address hidden>
Date: Tue Nov 19 17:06:18 2013 +1000

    Fixed wording and reorganised Block Storage intro

    As per the bug, updated the wording and slightly reorganised
    the Block Storage intro. Watch this space for the rest of the book.

    Change-Id: I38d1a6c0c9dc093235db0573399fab459a5bc1db
    backport: havana
    Partial-Bug: #1251195

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/58919

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/58924

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/59536

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Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/59536
Committed: http://github.com/openstack/openstack-manuals/commit/b2ddb85cc62b225a60c31e90cd713fb016514ab0
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit b2ddb85cc62b225a60c31e90cd713fb016514ab0
Author: loquacity <email address hidden>
Date: Mon Dec 2 14:38:50 2013 -0600

    General updates to the dashboard chapter

    As per the bug, updated the wording for the Dashboard chapter.
    Watch this space for the rest of the book.

    Change-Id: Idc68e3f241392cae48b7e786951222984c337e09
    Partial-Bug: #1251195

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Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/58919
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/openstack-manuals/commit/?id=149d0e1888086e3a8b8d8f94adbf6ffb9feec9a0
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit 149d0e1888086e3a8b8d8f94adbf6ffb9feec9a0
Author: Lana Brindley <email address hidden>
Date: Thu Nov 28 15:34:07 2013 +1000

    General updates to Compute for style and convention

    Editing the top third of the compute chapter. Mostly grammar, wording,
    style, convention, etc. Some minor section-level editing to improve
    readability. Watch this space for more edits on these bugs.

    Change-Id: If541f4a5e20251c94f6cbf416ff7c0d0e4c66892
    Partial-Bug: #1251195
    Partial-Bug: #1121866

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/93868

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/93868
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/openstack-manuals/commit/?id=3981735acda1329f8ea4cac8c5d0daa5b1f083c7
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit 3981735acda1329f8ea4cac8c5d0daa5b1f083c7
Author: Darren <email address hidden>
Date: Fri May 16 17:27:04 2014 +1000

    Edited Services sections of Admin Guide

    Edit wording; changed term/description lists to variable lists as per writing
    conventions

    backport: none
    Partial-Bug: #1251195

    Change-Id: I3b7f3fedafa79ab64f75260fcd3c5daa7cbb5e34

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/127040

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/127040
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/openstack-manuals/commit/?id=729e06b9b8a8c933e4f32c49efb56a028b035e3a
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit 729e06b9b8a8c933e4f32c49efb56a028b035e3a
Author: imran <email address hidden>
Date: Wed Oct 8 14:55:36 2014 -0700

    Fixed the missing opening bracket and grammar

    There is a closing bracket, but not the opening bracket, in the first sentence of logging module guide here,
    http://docs.openstack.org/admin-guide-cloud/content/section_manage-logs.html
    Also fixed minor grammatical mistake inserting 'is' .
    Partial-Bug: #1251195

    Change-Id: I29c7c2f186ec2abb248f6d199382d054769ca992

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/128067

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/128067
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/openstack-manuals/commit/?id=829eb4b25af553e048f3f8abb72de61b9ae5e4fc
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit 829eb4b25af553e048f3f8abb72de61b9ae5e4fc
Author: hayderimran7 <email address hidden>
Date: Mon Oct 13 12:32:03 2014 -0700

    Removed redundant the word

    In keystone trust guide, there is an extra 'the' word found, which changed the structure of sentence.

    Partial-Bug: #1251195

    Change-Id: I16a5c88e9f6f9b35d6d1b3e5443e0af1c08e7e76

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/149117

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/149136

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/149136
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/openstack-manuals/commit/?id=6429aed4f785ffc1e48121997fd57718dd4e18ce
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit 6429aed4f785ffc1e48121997fd57718dd4e18ce
Author: Lana Brindley <email address hidden>
Date: Thu Jan 22 14:21:57 2015 +1000

    General updates to Compute for style and convention

    Editing the nested sections for the compute chapter. Mostly grammar, wording,
    style, convention, etc. This patch includes ipv6 and migrations. Watch this
    space for more.

    Change-Id: I3fe8c2d253f0e7e27df43280e03844580bcfe6c4
    Partial-Bug: #1251195

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/149117
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/openstack-manuals/commit/?id=66355045d239d8320222ebbb02b46adf12190f98
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit 66355045d239d8320222ebbb02b46adf12190f98
Author: Lana Brindley <email address hidden>
Date: Thu Jan 22 11:59:05 2015 +1000

    General updates to Compute for style and convention

        Editing the remainder of the compute chapter. Mostly grammar, wording,
        style, convention, etc.

        Partial-Bug: #1251195

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    Change-Id: I92d3606c9630d4c3443fd1609afdfc91a56de3e1

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/151543

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/151988

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/151543
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/openstack-manuals/commit/?id=e84da9e7b6011bf600674b385fdf669ee52aa087
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit e84da9e7b6011bf600674b385fdf669ee52aa087
Author: Lana Brindley <email address hidden>
Date: Fri Jan 30 16:12:24 2015 +1000

    General updates to Compute for style and convention

        Editing the nested sections for the compute chapter. Mostly grammar,
        wording, style, convention, etc. This patch includes service groups,
        image management, building blocks, management tools, and nova networking.
        Watch this space for more.

        Partial-Bug: #1251195

    Change-Id: I07c021b653787dd95ffeba70e67f9b66f6eb242c

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/151988
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/openstack-manuals/commit/?id=efa6f3b412ffc18784bae58bd6501ac5f2cb069b
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit efa6f3b412ffc18784bae58bd6501ac5f2cb069b
Author: Lana Brindley <email address hidden>
Date: Mon Feb 2 15:03:57 2015 +1000

    General updates to Compute for style and convention

    Editing the nested sections for the compute chapter. Mostly grammar, wording,
    style, convention, etc. This patch includes recovery. Watch this space for more.

    Change-Id: I52046e71046cea0ab46929a0f1a2833e01f8cd9b
    Partial-Bug: #1251195

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/154344

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/156113

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/154344
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/openstack-manuals/commit/?id=e880c6e326210dc409bd1f01446cddfefb3129eb
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit e880c6e326210dc409bd1f01446cddfefb3129eb
Author: Lana Brindley <email address hidden>
Date: Tue Feb 10 15:54:44 2015 +1000

    General updates to Compute for style and convention

    Editing the nested sections for the compute chapter. Mostly grammar, wording,
    style, convention, etc. This patch includes rootwrap and security. Watch this
    space for more.

    Change-Id: I63d9691e64f14c4eba9ca4440930f06e757f9750
    Partial-Bug: #1251195

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/156113
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/openstack-manuals/commit/?id=596c8a8fbe2e360a3195e2b4f12f9538e4900fc6
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit 596c8a8fbe2e360a3195e2b4f12f9538e4900fc6
Author: Lana Brindley <email address hidden>
Date: Mon Feb 16 13:48:07 2015 +1000

    General updates to Compute for style and convention

    Editing the nested sections for the compute chapter. Mostly grammar, wording,
    style, convention, etc. This patch includes the final nested sections:
    system-admin, config-firewalls, and compute-pools.

    Change-Id: I6469364c37c23b57d66b0ddff754ddcb8e92bc28
    Closes-Bug: #1251195

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

This issue was fixed in the openstack/openstack-manuals 15.0.0 release.