Paragraph Identity Service concepts.
The paragraph has a different layout and purpose of the others in the same chapter; I would recommend some harmonization.
In fact, the other paragraphs describe what the service does (a brief description of the function) and how they are built (the components).
This paragraph is different describing some concepts implemented by the service (users, tenants, etc...) but not the components.
In my humble opinion, also this paragraph should have a layout and a purpose similar to the others.
I'm attaching some notes that should serve the purpose.
Note that the format is not exactly the same used in the document for describing the other services. Feel free to use the contents, if you think it is useful.
Also remove the hyperlinks: I wrote them just for checking the validity of the source where I found the information.
If the suggestion is accepted, I would also recommend to:
- change the paragraph title to "Identity service" to make it similar to the "sibling" paragraph in the same chapter
- move the 'concept table' (the table defining User, credentials, etc...) to paragraph "Identity Service Concepts" in "Identity Management" chapter.
The latter change would also remove some redundancy.
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Thanks Marco :D