doc: Quality of Service (QoS) in Neutron

[Arkady Shtempler]

Link to QoS: https://docs.openstack.org/neutron/pike/admin/config-qos.html

# Actual description (User Workflow) section
QoS policies are only created by admins with the default policy.json. Therefore, you should have the cloud operator set them up on behalf of the cloud projects.

If projects are trusted to create their own policies, check the trusted projects policy.json configuration section.

# Expected
If projects are <<<NOT>>> trusted to create their own policies, check the trusted projects policy.json configuration section.

It should be "NOT" in previous sentence, it doesn't make sense without.

[Slawek Kaplonski (slaweq)]

IMO it's fine like it's now. It means something like:

"If You trust Your projects and allows them to create QoS policies, then check trusted projects policy.json section to check how to allow them creation of QoS policies."

[Akihiro Motoki (amotoki)]

> If projects are trusted to create their own policies, check the trusted projects policy.json configuration section.

This paragraph says if you would like to allow projects to create their own policies you should read the policy.json configuration section [1], so I believe the current content is valid. What "Expected" section says in your bug report does not look correct to me.

[1] https://docs.openstack.org/neutron/pike/admin/config-qos.html#trusted-projects-policy-json-configuration

[Arkady Shtempler (ashtempl)]

So it looks like I was the only one who was confused by this sentence :(
Don't you find it relevant to rephrase/elaborate it?

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