About Kubuntu Docs Review

[Steven Richards]

Binary package hint: kubuntu-docs

More bugs or things that need to be looked at for the About Kubuntu section

About Kubuntu - Introduction to Kubuntu
Same paragraph as "Welcome and Thank You"
Example of Kubuntu Desktop picture appears to be missing
Second paragraph is a huge run-on, consider rephrasing

Philosophy:
- The team behind the Ubuntu and Kubuntu projects makes the following commitments to its users:
+ The team behind the Ubuntu and Kubuntu projects make the following commitments to its users:

-Kubuntu includes the best translations and accessibility infrastructure that the free software community has to offer to make Kubuntu usable by as many people as possible.
+Kubuntu includes the best translations and accessibility infrastructure that the free software community has to offer in order to make Kubuntu usable by as many people as possible.

Kubuntu is committed to the principles of free software and open source development; we encourage people to use free and open source software, improve it and pass it on.
^Missing comma after "improve it"

What is Linux?

- Linux is an operating system kernel that resembles the UNIX operating system. The kernel is the main software required for free operating systems such as Kubuntu. Linux has become a leading element of the worldwide movement to embrace free and open source software. The term "GNU/Linux" is another way of referring to the Linux kernel; it was created by the Free Software Foundation, because the Linux kernel was created with many components from the GNU Project.

+ Linux is an operating system kernel that resembles the UNIX operating system. The kernel is the main pieace of software required for free operating systems such as Kubuntu to exist. Linux has become a leading element in the worldwide movement to embrace free and open source software. The term "GNU/Linux" is another way of referring to the Linux kernel; it was created by the Free Software Foundation, because the Linux kernel was created with many components from the GNU Project.

What is KDE?

The first paragraph is mostly one large run-on, consider shrinking the examples of KDE's products.
-KDE 4's full-featured applications run natively on Linux, BSD, Solaris, Windows and Mac OS X.
+KDE 4's full-featured applications run natively on Linux, BSD, Solaris, Windows, and Mac OS X.

Switching Desktops:
- there is a choice between using the GNOME Display Manager (GDM) or the KDE Display Manager (KDM) as the login manager.
+ there is a choice between using the GNOME Display Manager (GDM) or the KDE Display Manager (KDM) while at the login manager.

[Steven Richards (steven.richards)]

http://bazaar.launchpad.net/~steven.richards/kubuntu-docs/lucid/revision/177
Patch

[Nitesh Mistry (mistrynitesh)]

Is this patch committed to the main branch?

[Jonathan Jesse (jjesse)]

 Not commited to the main branch, i will work on applying the patch, assinging myself and changing the status

[Jonathan Jesse (jjesse)]

made some change,s though not much still applied, thanks for the diff though... pushed to oneric and changing status

[Jonathan Jesse (jjesse)]

Marking this as fix released as the issues currently don't exist in the released version of Kubuntu Docs for 12.04