Reorder for clarity, and use a comma after "for example", p.62

Bug #586358 reported by Marc Stewart
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Ubuntu Manual
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Jason Cook

Bug Description

Rev. 788
Ch. 3, § "Setting up your Sending options", p. 62 (PDF p. 64)
Types: style; grammar

Manual has:
Enter your username below, in the Username field, for example joe.x.user, or <email address hidden>.

"For example" should be followed by a comma. It might also be better next to "username", since that's what the example is actually of.

Below that, enter your username, for example, joe.x.user, or <email address hidden>, in the Username field.
OR
Below that, in the Username field, enter your username, for example, joe.x.user, or <email address hidden>.

Changed in ubuntu-manual:
assignee: nobody → Jason.Cook599 (jason-cook599)
status: New → In Progress
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: In Progress → Fix Committed
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: Fix Committed → Fix Released
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