Reorder for clarity, and use a comma after "for example", p.62
Bug #586358 reported by
Marc Stewart
This bug affects 1 person
Affects | Status | Importance | Assigned to | Milestone | |
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Ubuntu Manual |
Fix Released
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Undecided
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Jason Cook |
Bug Description
Rev. 788
Ch. 3, § "Setting up your Sending options", p. 62 (PDF p. 64)
Types: style; grammar
Manual has:
Enter your username below, in the Username field, for example joe.x.user, or <email address hidden>.
"For example" should be followed by a comma. It might also be better next to "username", since that's what the example is actually of.
Below that, enter your username, for example, joe.x.user, or <email address hidden>, in the Username field.
OR
Below that, in the Username field, enter your username, for example, joe.x.user, or <email address hidden>.
Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
assignee: | nobody → Jason.Cook599 (jason-cook599) |
status: | New → In Progress |
Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
status: | In Progress → Fix Committed |
Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
status: | Fix Committed → Fix Released |
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