Redundancy in "Bookmarking a page", p. 58

Bug #585936 reported by Marc Stewart
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Ubuntu Manual
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Jason Cook

Bug Description

Rev. 788
Ch. 3, § "Bookmarking a page", p. 58 (PDF p. 60)
Type: redundancy

Manual has:
If you have navigated to a web page and would like to bookmark it for future visits, you will need to add the page as a bookmark.

The first part of the sentence mentions bookmarking the page, making the second part redundant.

Suggestion:
If you would like to save a web page's location for future visits, you can bookmark the page.

Changed in ubuntu-manual:
assignee: nobody → Jason.Cook599 (jason-cook599)
status: New → In Progress
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: In Progress → Fix Committed
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: Fix Committed → Fix Released
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