Ubuntu can also connect p.50

Bug #585850 reported by Marc Stewart
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Ubuntu Manual
Fix Released
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Chris Woollard

Bug Description

Rev. 788
Ch. 3, § "Other connection methods", p. 50
Type: style

Manual has:
Ubuntu can also connect using mobile broadband, VPNs, or DSLs, however, these methods are beyond the scope of this guide.

Ignoring the comma splice, this would be fine if mobile broadband, VPNs, and DSL hadn't just been mentioned, making "also" inappropriate:

Suggestion:
The details of making connections using mobile broadband, VPNs, or DSLs, however, are beyond the scope of this guide.

Changed in ubuntu-manual:
assignee: nobody → Chris Woollard (cwoollard)
status: New → In Progress
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: In Progress → Fix Committed
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
milestone: none → edition-2
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: Fix Committed → Fix Released
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