Ubuntu can also connect p.50
Bug #585850 reported by
Marc Stewart
This bug affects 1 person
Affects | Status | Importance | Assigned to | Milestone | |
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Ubuntu Manual |
Fix Released
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Undecided
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Chris Woollard |
Bug Description
Rev. 788
Ch. 3, § "Other connection methods", p. 50
Type: style
Manual has:
Ubuntu can also connect using mobile broadband, VPNs, or DSLs, however, these methods are beyond the scope of this guide.
Ignoring the comma splice, this would be fine if mobile broadband, VPNs, and DSL hadn't just been mentioned, making "also" inappropriate:
Suggestion:
The details of making connections using mobile broadband, VPNs, or DSLs, however, are beyond the scope of this guide.
Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
assignee: | nobody → Chris Woollard (cwoollard) |
status: | New → In Progress |
Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
status: | In Progress → Fix Committed |
Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
milestone: | none → edition-2 |
Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
status: | Fix Committed → Fix Released |
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