typo/grammar errors on p. 83

Bug #585671 reported by zpletan
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Ubuntu Manual
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Brandon Jardine

Bug Description

I am reading the Ubuntu Manual v. 788 (as part of the "Show us ya bugs" initiative), and in Chapter 3, on p. 83, I believe I have discovered both a typo and a couple of comma splices.

Each one of you accounts will have a set of icons to go with it, these are displayed on the left hand size of the “Social broadcast message” window. The set of icons that goes with an account has a background color, each one of these icons allows you to do tasks for that specific account.

Note that here "you accounts" are mentioned, and also note the comma splices after "go with it" and "has a background color".

Changed in ubuntu-manual:
assignee: nobody → Brandon Jardine (brandon-jardine)
status: New → In Progress
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: In Progress → Fix Committed
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: Fix Committed → Fix Released
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