Suggest comma before "such as" on p.32
Bug #585361 reported by
Marc Stewart
This bug affects 1 person
| Affects | Status | Importance | Assigned to | Milestone | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Ubuntu Manual |
Fix Released
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Undecided
|
Jason Cook | ||
Bug Description
Rev. 788
Ch. 2, § "Customizing your desktop", p. 32 (PDF p. 34)
Type: copy edit suggestion
Manual has:
Now [...] let’s take a look at customizing some of its features such as modifying the behavior of your panels, or changing the look and feel of your desktop.
Since the sentence could end after "features", this particular use of "such as" is better preceded by a comma, such as it is at many other points in the manual.
| Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
| assignee: | nobody → Kevin Godby (godbyk) |
| milestone: | none → edition-2 |
| status: | New → In Progress |
| Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
| assignee: | Kevin Godby (godbyk) → Jason.Cook599 (jason-cook599) |
| Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
| status: | In Progress → Fix Committed |
| Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
| status: | Fix Committed → Fix Released |
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