Comma splice on p.19
Bug #585292 reported by
Marc Stewart
This bug affects 1 person
| Affects | Status | Importance | Assigned to | Milestone | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Ubuntu Manual |
Fix Released
|
Undecided
|
Chris Woollard | ||
Bug Description
Rev. 788
Ch.1, § "Log in automatically", p. 19 (PDF p. 21)
Type: grammar
Manual has a comma splice (before "however"):
This makes your login experience quicker and more convenient, however, if privacy or security are important to you, this option is not recommended.
Either the comma before "however" should be a full stop or semicolon, or the appropriate conjunction, "but", should be employed:
This makes your login experience quicker and more convenient, but if privacy or security are important to you, this option is not recommended.
| Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
| assignee: | nobody → Chris Woollard (cwoollard) |
| status: | New → In Progress |
| status: | In Progress → Fix Committed |
| Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
| milestone: | none → edition-2 |
| Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
| status: | Fix Committed → Fix Released |
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