Comma splice on p.18
Bug #585288 reported by
Marc Stewart
This bug affects 1 person
| Affects | Status | Importance | Assigned to | Milestone | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Ubuntu Manual |
Fix Released
|
Undecided
|
Chris Woollard | ||
Bug Description
Rev. 788
Ch. 1, § "Enter your details", p.18 (PDF p.20)
Type: grammar
Manual has a comma splice (before "however"):
You will be able to continue the installation process regardless of your password strength, however, for security reasons it is best to choose a strong one.
This could be corrected with a semicolon or full stop, but "but" would keep it single-sentenced:
You will be able to continue the installation process regardless of your password strength, but for security reasons it is best to choose a strong one.
| Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
| assignee: | nobody → Chris Woollard (cwoollard) |
| status: | New → In Progress |
| status: | In Progress → Fix Committed |
| Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
| milestone: | none → edition-2 |
| Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
| status: | Fix Committed → Fix Released |
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