Awkward wording on page 10 under contact details
Bug #584636 reported by
Mo-Yu Mandy Zhou
This bug affects 1 person
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| Ubuntu Manual |
Fix Released
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Bug Description
Version: 788
Chapter and page number: Prologue, p. 10 (p. 12 of the PDF)
Type: style/grammar
The first line under 'Contact details' reads "Many people have contributed their time freely [...]". This sounds a little awkward; perhaps "Many people have freely contributed their time" would be an improvement.
Revision history for this message
| ilya haykinson (haykinson) wrote | #1 |
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| status: | New → In Progress |
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| status: | In Progress → Fix Committed |
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| status: | Fix Committed → Fix Released |
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removed "freely" altogether; that's clear given "contributed"