Awkward wording on page 9; rephrasing recommended
Bug #584633 reported by
Mo-Yu Mandy Zhou
This bug affects 1 person
| Affects | Status | Importance | Assigned to | Milestone | |
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| Ubuntu Manual |
Fix Released
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Bug Description
Version: 788
Chapter and page number: Prologue, p. 9 (p. 11 of the PDF)
Type: grammar/sentence structure/style
The second sentence of the second bullet point under 'Is Ubuntu right for you?' reads "For the vast majority of tasks that people use their computers for every day [...]", which sounds rather awkward. An alternative is "For the vast majority of everyday tasks that computer use facilitates [...]".
Revision history for this message
| ilya haykinson (haykinson) wrote | #1 |
| Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
| status: | New → In Progress |
| Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
| status: | In Progress → Fix Committed |
| Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
| status: | Fix Committed → Fix Released |
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