"Laptop computers commonly use Wi-Fi due to their portability"
Bug #584573 reported by
haydoni
This bug affects 1 person
| Affects | Status | Importance | Assigned to | Milestone | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Ubuntu Manual |
Fix Released
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Undecided
|
ilya haykinson | ||
Bug Description
Chapter 3, Paragraph 3, sentence 2: "Laptop computers com-
monly use Wi-Fi due to their portability,"
This sounds ambiguous (to me), one might ask if some portable laptop computers cannot use a wired connection due to their portability.
I suggest they "...due to its portability" (i.e. Wi-Fi's portability)", "...commonly use Wi-Fi to take advantage of their portability", or simply "...for portability".
| Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
| assignee: | nobody → ilya haykinson (haykinson) |
| Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
| status: | New → In Progress |
| Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
| status: | In Progress → Fix Committed |
| Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
| status: | Fix Committed → Fix Released |
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