Overcomplicated sentence

Bug #584488 reported by Mark Hepworth
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Ubuntu Manual
Fix Released
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Brandon Jardine

Bug Description

Chp 6 p123

"Apt is extremely versatile and encompasses several tools, however, the most commonly used apt tool is apt-get."

An overcomplicated sentence. Simplify: "Apt is extremely versatile and include several tools, the most commonly used of which is apt-get."

Changed in ubuntu-manual:
assignee: nobody → Brandon Jardine (brandon-jardine)
status: New → In Progress
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: In Progress → Fix Committed
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: Fix Committed → Fix Released
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