Rephrase "some things that work very differently" (page 9)
Bug #584460 reported by
Andrew
This bug affects 1 person
Affects | Status | Importance | Assigned to | Milestone | |
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Ubuntu Manual |
Fix Released
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Low
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Jason Cook |
Bug Description
In the below sentence, "some things that work very differently" should be rephrased to "differences". As well as this being the antonym of the word previously used (similarities) it is a lot less confusing and simpler.
You will no doubt notice many similarities to both Microsoft Windows and Mac OSX, as well as some things that work very differently.
becomes
You will no doubt notice many similarities to both Microsoft Windows and Mac OSX, as well as some differences.
Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
assignee: | Kevin Godby (godbyk) → Jason.Cook599 (jason-cook599) |
status: | In Progress → Fix Committed |
Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
status: | Fix Committed → Fix Released |
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While the original text is a bit awkward, it does emphasis that there are some major differences (as opposed to slight differences). Can we rephrase the sentence to maintain that emphasis?