Move however to start of sentence (page 9)
Bug #584459 reported by
Andrew
This bug affects 1 person
| Affects | Status | Importance | Assigned to | Milestone | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Ubuntu Manual |
Invalid
|
Low
|
Kevin Godby | ||
Bug Description
Move however to the start of the sentence
In the past decade, however, graphical user interfaces have come a long way in terms of usability,
reliability and appearance
becomes
However, in the past decade, graphical user interfaces have come a long way in terms of usability,
reliability and appearance
Revision history for this message
| Andrew (and471) wrote | #1 |
Revision history for this message
| Kevin Godby (godbyk) wrote | #2 |
| Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
| status: | New → Invalid |
| importance: | Undecided → Low |
| assignee: | nobody → Kevin Godby (godbyk) |
| milestone: | none → edition-2 |
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| Andrew (and471) wrote | #3 |
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I think it's fine where it is. Having the introductory phrase remark on the time period keeps the focus in line with the history we're telling.