Comma splice in Getting Help with Ubuntu slide

Bug #428652 reported by Scott Testerman
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ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu (Ubuntu)
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Bug Description

Binary package hint: ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu

The last sentence on the "Getting Help with Ubuntu" slide is a comma splice.

"The installation will finish soon, we hope that you enjoy using Ubuntu!"

These two independent clauses should either be joined by a semicolon ("The installation will finish soon; we hope that you enjoy using Ubuntu!") or split into two complete sentences ("The installation will finish soon. We hope that you enjoy using Ubuntu!").

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Alex Lourie (alourie) wrote :

Adding ubuntu-docs to recipients.

Changed in ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu (Ubuntu):
status: New → Confirmed
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Alex Lourie (alourie) wrote :

I actually like the separate sentences better, like Scott suggested:

"The installation will finish soon. We hope that you enjoy using Ubuntu!"

Changed in ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu (Ubuntu):
status: Confirmed → Fix Committed
Changed in ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu (Ubuntu):
status: Fix Committed → Fix Released
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