http://docs.mirantis.com/openstack/fuel/fuel-6.0/operations.html#accessing-the-shell-on-the-nodes
SSH to target nodes
You can SSH to any of the target nodes in your environment from the Fuel Master node.
Should be:
SSH to the target nodes
If at least one node has a higher ...
Should be:
If, at least, one node has a higher ...
http://docs.mirantis.com/openstack/fuel/fuel-6.0/operations.html#howto-backport-galera-pacemaker-ocf-script
Copy the script to all controllers
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Copy the script to all controllers:
Configure the p_mysql resource for the new Galera OCF script
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Configure the p_mysql resource for the new Galera OCF script:
Check whether Galera Cluster is synced and functioning.
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Check whether Galera Cluster is synced and functioning:
IPs of all nodes should be present in Galera Cluster. This guarantees that
all nodes participate in Cluster operations and acting properly.
Should be:
IPs of all nodes should be present in Galera Cluster. This guarantees that all nodes participate in Cluster operations and acting properly:
Restart MySQL related services.
Should be:
Restart MySQL related services:
Denis, thanks for reporting.
"SSH to target nodes" here does not need a definite article, since the target nodes are: a) plural; b) not specific nodes.
"If at least one node has a higher" -- "at least" does not need the punctuation marks, since "at least" refers to "one node" and does not make the sentence ambiguous without the extra punctuation.