openstack-manuals

Remove passive voice from Chap 2 Arch guide

Bug #1400552 reported by Alexandra Settle
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openstack-manuals
Fix Released
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Brian Moss
openstack-manuals kilo

Bug Description

Please remove passive voice from Chapter 2 (Compute Focus) of the Architecture Design Guide

Tags: arch-design
Alexandra Settle (alexandra-settle)
Changed in openstack-manuals:
assignee: nobody → Alexandra Settle (alexandra-settle)
Alexandra Settle (alexandra-settle)
Changed in openstack-manuals:
assignee: Alexandra Settle (alexandra-settle) → nobody
Lana (loquacity)
Changed in openstack-manuals:
assignee: nobody → Lana (loquacity)
Tom Fifield (fifieldt)
Changed in openstack-manuals:
status: New → Confirmed
importance: Undecided → Wishlist
milestone: none → kilo
tags: added: arch-design
Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix proposed to openstack-manuals (master)

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/141174

Changed in openstack-manuals:
status: Confirmed → In Progress
Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix merged to openstack-manuals (master)

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/141174
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/openstack-manuals/commit/?id=05d0939c236d4b72e8be1d60fc4371a3ea76eb11
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit 05d0939c236d4b72e8be1d60fc4371a3ea76eb11
Author: Lana Brindley <email address hidden>
Date: Fri Dec 12 07:33:58 2014 +1000

    Removing passive voice from compute focus chapter

    Working through the compute focus chapter to remove passive voice.

    Change-Id: I6f9de35d11ce43efa025472fa08ea23ec1a2d114
    Partial-Bug: #1400552

Alexandra Settle (alexandra-settle)
Changed in openstack-manuals:
assignee: Lana (loquacity) → Alexandra Settle (alexandra-settle)
Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote :

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/174187
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/openstack-manuals/commit/?id=918199823b36465f07f9f9c46a1ce2c63dcc4182
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit 918199823b36465f07f9f9c46a1ce2c63dcc4182
Author: asettle <email address hidden>
Date: Thu Apr 16 12:29:44 2015 +1000

    Removal of passive voice from chap 2, arch guide

    1. Removal of passive voice from section_operational_considerations
    2. Removal of minor content that does not add value to the section

    Change-Id: I6359353854c3cafffac0f8e32b4086f23125849f
    Partial-bug: #1400552

Brian Moss (bmoss)
Changed in openstack-manuals:
assignee: Alexandra Settle (alexandra-settle) → Brian Moss (bmoss)
Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix proposed to openstack-manuals (master)

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/177079

Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix merged to openstack-manuals (master)

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/177079
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/openstack-manuals/commit/?id=60002fc5be024fa469c61e142167493b8a934bcc
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit 60002fc5be024fa469c61e142167493b8a934bcc
Author: Brian Moss <email address hidden>
Date: Thu Apr 23 09:48:06 2015 +1000

    Remove passive voice from Arch Guide Chap 2

    Closes-Bug: #1400552

    Change-Id: I5b1572d7b5cf3321dcfa2836d7f777fe450a87e3

Changed in openstack-manuals:
status: In Progress → Fix Released
Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix included in openstack/openstack-manuals 15.0.0

This issue was fixed in the openstack/openstack-manuals 15.0.0 release.

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