Remove passive voice from Chap 1 Arch guide

Bug #1400550 reported by Alexandra Settle
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openstack-manuals
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Medium
Alexandra Settle

Bug Description

Please remove passive voice from Chapter 1 (General Purpose) of the Architecture Design Guide

Changed in openstack-manuals:
assignee: nobody → Alexandra Settle (alexandra-settle)
Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix proposed to openstack-manuals (master)

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/140213

Changed in openstack-manuals:
status: New → In Progress
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OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix merged to openstack-manuals (master)

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/140213
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/openstack-manuals/commit/?id=2b3659ab774ac395c176b4a4f25db26b42ba2c80
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit 2b3659ab774ac395c176b4a4f25db26b42ba2c80
Author: Alexandra Settle <email address hidden>
Date: Tue Dec 9 13:05:35 2014 +1000

    Removal of passive voice from chap 1, arch guide

    Removal of passive voice from ch_generalpurpose

    Change-Id: I09379f5cdf90ef8ccfa88468b961b10a966c9412
    Partial-bug: #1400550

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OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix proposed to openstack-manuals (master)

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/140892

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OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote :

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/140945

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OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix merged to openstack-manuals (master)

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/140892
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/openstack-manuals/commit/?id=e68cd33d834b2e2e3ed881ca4af90237cfb6951d
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit e68cd33d834b2e2e3ed881ca4af90237cfb6951d
Author: Alexandra Settle <email address hidden>
Date: Thu Dec 11 11:36:46 2014 +1000

    Removal of passive voice from chap 1, arch guide

    Removal of passive voice from section_operational_considerations

    Change-Id: I2f10119c7d461cc11919b68657eea6cb9ccfd3fd
    Partial-bug: #1400550

Changed in openstack-manuals:
assignee: Alexandra Settle (alexandra-settle) → Lana (loquacity)
Changed in openstack-manuals:
assignee: Lana (loquacity) → Alexandra Settle (alexandra-settle)
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Andreas Jaeger (jaegerandi) wrote :

Alexandra, no need to have a bug for each chapter, feel free to use this for the whole book (after changing the title)

Changed in openstack-manuals:
importance: Undecided → Medium
Changed in openstack-manuals:
assignee: Alexandra Settle (alexandra-settle) → Andreas Jaeger (jaegerandi)
Changed in openstack-manuals:
assignee: Andreas Jaeger (jaegerandi) → Alexandra Settle (alexandra-settle)
Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote :

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/140945
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/openstack-manuals/commit/?id=b02d4f1fd0e01e1333488a3969a5058b8992eedc
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit b02d4f1fd0e01e1333488a3969a5058b8992eedc
Author: Alexandra Settle <email address hidden>
Date: Thu Dec 11 17:16:29 2014 +1000

    Removal of passive voice from chap 1, arch guide

    Removal of passive voice from section_architecture

    Change-Id: Ic95411e5afa97aaef990fd12dbabc59c88f38183
    Partial-bug: #1400550

Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix proposed to openstack-manuals (master)

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/141673

Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix merged to openstack-manuals (master)

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/141673
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/openstack-manuals/commit/?id=88c00d36110944fd973415a6600f2d5005ad54ee
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit 88c00d36110944fd973415a6600f2d5005ad54ee
Author: Alexandra Settle <email address hidden>
Date: Mon Dec 15 09:40:18 2014 +1000

    Removal of passive voice from chap 1, arch guide

    Removal of passive voice from section_prescriptive_examples,
    and section_user_requirements

    Change-Id: I5559946ec14fee7dc9fdbeae399d493ebd87e51b
    Partial-bug: #1400550

Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix proposed to openstack-manuals (master)

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/153448

Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix merged to openstack-manuals (master)

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/153448
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/openstack-manuals/commit/?id=c07eb92e886f66f3459229d2c9bd49a3e2d46cd2
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit c07eb92e886f66f3459229d2c9bd49a3e2d46cd2
Author: Alexandra Settle <email address hidden>
Date: Fri Feb 6 12:39:04 2015 +1000

    Removal of passive voice from chap 1, arch guide

    Removal of passive voice from section_tech_considerations

    Change-Id: I1db9d768bf50944d9aa987b7342fdb32a300bb98
    Closes-bug: #1400550

Changed in openstack-manuals:
status: In Progress → Fix Released
Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix included in openstack/openstack-manuals 15.0.0

This issue was fixed in the openstack/openstack-manuals 15.0.0 release.

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