Chapter 6. Identity in OpenStack Security Guide - minor grammatical/format issues

[Priti Desai]

Issue 1:

Under Section Invalid login attempts, the sentence has a missing space before Detection:

If prevention is not an option, detection can be used to mitigate damage.Detection involves frequent

It should be:

If prevention is not an option, detection can be used to mitigate damage. Detection involves frequent

Issue 2:

Under section Internally implemented authentication methods, the file path is incorrect. Keystone conf file is located under /etc/keystone/keystone.conf instead of /etc/keystone.conf.

The same issue exists under section for Service authorization.

Issue 3:

Minor grammatical mistake under section Service authorization:

Sentence must read as:

In this case, the validity check must be disabled or the certificate should be marked as trusted.

Instead of

In this case, the validity check must disabled or the certificate marked as trusted.

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Built: 2014-09-11T07:14:26 00:00
git SHA: 674925b9d68f235e8e46b2e55b8ce454f17f2a3a
URL: http://docs.openstack.org/security-guide/content/identity.html
source File: file:/home/jenkins/workspace/security-doc-tox-doc-publishdocs/security-guide/ch_identity.xml
xml:id: identity

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Fix proposed to branch: stable/icehouse
Review: https://review.openstack.org/121791

[naggappan (naggappan)]

Hi ,

I am not able to find the sentence for Issue 3. It exists only in the the existing url. But when i reverted to the icehouse version i did not get such a sentence.

Fixed other 2 issue and submitted for review

https://review.openstack.org/121791

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/121801

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/121801
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/security-doc/commit/?id=7a659791176ffd7562fc955f96c0a1c5fd404dd2
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit 7a659791176ffd7562fc955f96c0a1c5fd404dd2
Author: naggappan <email address hidden>
Date: Tue Sep 16 15:54:20 2014 +0530

    Update incorrect keystone.conf file path and modified minor grammatical/format issues

    Change-Id: Id0630bd4021f42a5c271f9d2b680af4ab5bcc865
    Closes-Bug: #1368422

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Change abandoned by Christian Berendt (<email address hidden>) on branch: stable/icehouse
Review: https://review.openstack.org/121791