Security Guide - Chapter 43. Host aggregate cleanup

Bug #1344237 reported by N Dillon
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Affects Status Importance Assigned to Milestone
openstack-manuals
Fix Released
Low
Christian Berendt

Bug Description

Several awkward sentences here, including unclear wording.

Currently reads: "While not a filter in themselves, host aggregates allow administrators to assign key-value pairs to groups of machines. This allows cloud administrators, not users, to partition up their compute host resources. Each node can have multiple aggregates (see the Host aggregates section of the OpenStack Configuration Reference for more information on creating and managing aggregates)."

Recommended Update: "While not a filter, host aggregates allow administrators to assign key-value pairs to groups of machines. This allows cloud administrators to segregate their compute host resources within an availability zone invisible to users. The key-value pairs can be applied to multiple aggregates, or have several applied to a single aggregate (see the Host aggregates section of the OpenStack Configuration Reference for more information on creating and managing aggregates)."
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Built: 2014-07-18T11:07:05 00:00
git SHA: 2dc0f54e2f4b1a51cfcf33c90c799d0f1b3a1cb7
URL: http://docs.openstack.org/security-guide/content/security-services-for-instances.html
source File: file:/home/jenkins/workspace/security-doc-tox-doc-publishdocs/security-guide/ch_security-services-for-instances.xml
xml:id: security-services-for-instances

Changed in openstack-manuals:
status: New → Confirmed
importance: Undecided → Low
tags: added: low-hanging-fruit sec-guide
Changed in openstack-manuals:
assignee: nobody → George Zhao (george-zhao)
Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix proposed to security-doc (master)

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/113765

Changed in openstack-manuals:
status: Confirmed → In Progress
Changed in openstack-manuals:
assignee: George Zhao (george-zhao) → Christian Berendt (berendt)
Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix merged to security-doc (master)

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/113765
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/security-doc/commit/?id=67ee2c851cf770d0fdcc29ac3a0f78ae835587e9
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit 67ee2c851cf770d0fdcc29ac3a0f78ae835587e9
Author: George Zhao <email address hidden>
Date: Tue Aug 12 21:14:05 2014 -0700

    Fix awkward sentences and unclear words

    Re-word Host aggregates section to fix some awkward sentences and unclear words

    Co-Authored-By: Nathaniel Dillon <email address hidden>
    Closes-Bug: #1344237
    Change-Id: I7beedf55a05e0892d4f684d9d1bdb2089c1cdb36

Changed in openstack-manuals:
status: In Progress → Fix Released
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