Grammatical Errors - Chapter 2. System documentation requirements in OpenStack Security Guide - current
Affects | Status | Importance | Assigned to | Milestone | |
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openstack-manuals |
Fix Released
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High
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Gauvain Pocentek |
Bug Description
Incomplete sentence, does not articulate point of topic properly:
For example, compute nodes, storage nodes, and network devices that exist on the network but that might not be adequately protected and/or forgotten.
Proposed revision – merge the 1st part with the previous sentence and re-writing the context as shown below:
By leveraging a CMDB, an organization can quickly identify cloud infrastructure hardware such as compute nodes, storage nodes, or network devices. A CMDB can assist in identifying assets existing on the network which may have vulnerabilities due to inadequate protection or being displaced and forgotten.
Improper use of punctuation - Run on sentence:
Just as with hardware, all software components within the OpenStack deployment should be documented. Components here should include system databases; OpenStack software components and supporting sub-components; and, supporting infrastructure software such as load-balancers, reverse proxies, and network address translators. Having an authoritative list like this may be critical toward understanding total system impact due to a compromise or vulnerability of a specific class of software.
Proposed Revision:
Similar to treatment of hardware, all software components
All software components within an OpenStack deployment should be documented. Components should be inclusive of:
• System Databases
• OpenStack software components
• Supporting Infrastructure software
Implementation of an authoritative list may be critical toward understanding total system impact due to a compromise or vulnerability of a specific class of software.
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Built: 2014-07-17T17:41:53 00:00
git SHA: c14f57c7e299c76
URL: http://
source File: file:/home/
xml:id: system-
description: | updated |
Changed in openstack-manuals: | |
status: | New → Confirmed |
importance: | Undecided → Medium |
Changed in openstack-manuals: | |
assignee: | nobody → Shellee Arnold (shellee-arnold) |
summary: |
- Grammatical Errors - Chapter 6. System documentation requirements in + Grammatical Errors - Chapter 2. System documentation requirements in OpenStack Security Guide - current |
Changed in openstack-manuals: | |
importance: | Medium → High |
Changed in openstack-manuals: | |
assignee: | Shellee Arnold (shellee-arnold) → Gauvain Pocentek (gpocentek) |
Fix proposed to branch: master /review. openstack. org/157456
Review: https:/