Grammatical error - Chapter 2. Why and how we wrote this book in OpenStack Security Guide  - current

Bug #1343453 reported by Shellee Aragon
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This bug affects 1 person
Affects Status Importance Assigned to Milestone
openstack-manuals
Fix Released
Medium
N Dillon

Bug Description

Improper grammar resulting in ambiguity with usage of “the guide” in the sentence below:
The guide augments the OpenStack Operations Guide and can be referenced to harden existing OpenStack deployments or to evaluate the security controls of OpenStack cloud providers.

Proposed revision:
This guide augments the OpenStack Operations Guide and can be referenced to harden existing OpenStack deployments or to evaluate the security controls of OpenStack cloud providers.

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Built: 2014-07-17T17:41:52 00:00
git SHA: c14f57c7e299c76ed1e8f26f02a4a4892657a3eb
URL: http://docs.openstack.org/security-guide/content/why-and-how-we-wrote-this-book.html
source File: file:/home/jenkins/workspace/security-doc-tox-doc-publishdocs/security-guide/ch_why-and-how-we-wrote-this-book.xml
xml:id: why-and-how-we-wrote-this-book

Tags: sec-guide
Bryan D. Payne (bdpayne)
Changed in openstack-manuals:
status: New → Confirmed
importance: Undecided → Medium
N Dillon (sicarie)
Changed in openstack-manuals:
assignee: nobody → N Dillon (sicarie)
Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix proposed to security-doc (master)

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/108166

Changed in openstack-manuals:
status: Confirmed → In Progress
Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix merged to security-doc (master)

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/108166
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/security-doc/commit/?id=287ea415071f132a21f09fb1e9990e95b5e7c9e2
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit 287ea415071f132a21f09fb1e9990e95b5e7c9e2
Author: sicarie <email address hidden>
Date: Fri Jul 18 15:56:28 2014 -0700

    Replace 'the' with 'this' to add specificity

    Replaced ambiguous reference of 'the guide' with 'this guide'

    Change-Id: Id86d2eae09b96f9e9c7050d4b0f4a8490fb38307
    Closes-Bug: #1343453

Changed in openstack-manuals:
status: In Progress → Fix Released
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