Grammatical errors - Chapter 4. Security boundaries and threats in OpenStack Security Guide
Affects | Status | Importance | Assigned to | Milestone | |
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openstack-manuals |
Fix Released
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Low
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Mark Vanderwiel |
Bug Description
The sentence below has some odd wording and grammatical errors:
In contrast, privacy is one of the primary barriers to adoption for the public cloud, as many of these controls do not exist.
Proposed Revision:
In contrast, privacy is one of the primary barriers for the adoption of public cloud infrastructures, as many of the previously mentioned controls do not exist.
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Built: 2014-07-16T11:22:44 00:00
git SHA: f3f89b2859c9baa
URL: http://
source File: file:/home/
xml:id: security-
Changed in openstack-manuals: | |
assignee: | nobody → Mark Vanderwiel (vanderwl) |
Changed in openstack-manuals: | |
status: | Triaged → Fix Released |
Thanks Shellee!