Grammatical errors - Chapter 4. Security boundaries and threats in OpenStack Security Guide

[Shellee Aragon]

The sentence below has some odd wording and grammatical errors:

In contrast, privacy is one of the primary barriers to adoption for the public cloud, as many of these controls do not exist.

Proposed Revision:
In contrast, privacy is one of the primary barriers for the adoption of public cloud infrastructures, as many of the previously mentioned controls do not exist.

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[Tom Fifield (fifieldt)]

Thanks Shellee!