Missing Comma and redundant use of "and"- Chapter 4. Security boundaries and threats in OpenStack Security Guide

Bug #1342389 reported by Shellee Aragon
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This bug affects 1 person
Affects Status Importance Assigned to Milestone
openstack-manuals
Fix Released
Low
KATO Tomoyuki

Bug Description

For the paragraph below:

Similarly the API Endpoint in this diagram is bridging the untrusted public domain and the management domain, and should be configured to protect against attacks from the public domain propagating through to the management domain.

1. A comma should be added after "similarly"
2. Redundant use of the term "and" should be removed.

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Built: 2014-07-15T06:45:32 00:00
git SHA: 46a1753b5222a021d2b75d5b97d3d4fac9804671
URL: http://docs.openstack.org/security-guide/content/security-boundaries-and-threats.html
source File: file:/home/jenkins/workspace/security-doc-tox-doc-publishdocs/security-guide/ch_security-boundaries-and-threats.xml
xml:id: security-boundaries-and-threats

Tags: sec-guide
summary: - Missing Comma and redundant use od "And"- Chapter 4. Security boundaries
+ Missing Comma and redundant use of "and"- Chapter 4. Security boundaries
and threats in OpenStack Security Guide
Bryan D. Payne (bdpayne)
Changed in openstack-manuals:
status: New → Confirmed
importance: Undecided → Low
CloudDon (sriramhere)
Changed in openstack-manuals:
assignee: nobody → SriramHere (sriramhere)
Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix proposed to security-doc (master)

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/114862

Changed in openstack-manuals:
assignee: CloudDon (sriramhere) → KATO Tomoyuki (kato-tomoyuki)
status: Confirmed → In Progress
Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix merged to security-doc (master)

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/114862
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/security-doc/commit/?id=592c37a9b9636e3f06894cdd894eb67800733874
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit 592c37a9b9636e3f06894cdd894eb67800733874
Author: KATO Tomoyuki <email address hidden>
Date: Mon Aug 18 10:15:16 2014 +0900

    Add missing comma and remove redundant use of and

    Change-Id: I859d5e8cddeef1006c57f65dcc69d79fb9878c0c
    Closes-Bug: 1342389

Changed in openstack-manuals:
status: In Progress → Fix Released
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