The paragraph preceding should be re-written as it appears to have multiple instances of awkward wording. Under the heading of "Guest" the paragraph is shown below:
Public cloud providers and private cloud providers who do not have stringent controls on instance use or who allow unrestricted internet access to VMs should consider this domain to be untrusted. Private cloud providers may want to consider this network as internal and therefore trusted only if they have controls in place to assert that they trust instances and all their tenants.
1. "Public cloud providers and private cloud providers" is redundant, should combine the terms i.e. Public and private cloud providers.
2. The term "who" is improperly used.
3. Remove second instance of who
4. Remove the term "and" preceding the use of "therefore".
5. All text following the term "therefore" should be re-written to be more concise.
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Built: 2014-07-15T06:45:32 00:00
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URL: http://docs.openstack.org/security-guide/content/security-boundaries-and-threats.html
source File: file:/home/jenkins/workspace/security-doc-tox-doc-publishdocs/security-guide/ch_security-boundaries-and-threats.xml
xml:id: security-boundaries-and-threats
Fix proposed to branch: master
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