Nonsensical sentence - Chapter 4. Security boundaries and threats in OpenStack Security Guide

[Shellee Aragon]

The sentence below is full of grammatical errors, rendering it difficult to comprehend:

For example, some deployment topologies combine both guest and data domains onto one physical network versus others, which have these networks physically separated.

Can be re-written as:

For example, some deployment topologies may consist of a combination of domains, such as guest and data, on one physical network while other topologies have the domains separated.

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Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/107856

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/107856
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/security-doc/commit/?id=2d141ac604e62bfa81080060bd975aacb6c1696e
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit 2d141ac604e62bfa81080060bd975aacb6c1696e
Author: sicarie <email address hidden>
Date: Thu Jul 17 15:02:24 2014 -0700

    Squashing 3 small changes, mostly grammatical fixes, sentence structure, and trailing whitespace

    Combining two sentences in ch41 and clarifying risk, removing commas in ch41, and changing structure of sentence in ch4, remvoed trailing whitespace

    Closes-Bug: #1342331
    Closes-Bug: #1342328
    Closes-Bug: #1342343

    Change-Id: I041c1b640e703f8e198c26ca4c5c7235ad344c48