Chapter 41. Smoothing out rough sentence
Bug #1342328 reported by
N Dillon
This bug affects 1 person
| Affects | Status | Importance | Assigned to | Milestone | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| openstack-manuals |
Fix Released
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Low
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N Dillon | ||
Bug Description
"As this device is used by other instances, or even the host OS, the malicious code can spread into these systems."
Recommend removing commas and clarifying which device before referencing several others along the lines of: As the infected devices is used by other instances or host OS, the malicious code can spread into those systems.
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Built: 2014-07-15T19:04:59 00:00
git SHA: f7711cc343e5042
URL: http://
source File: file:/home/
xml:id: hardening-
| Changed in openstack-manuals: | |
| status: | New → Triaged |
| importance: | Undecided → Low |
| milestone: | none → juno |
| Changed in openstack-manuals: | |
| assignee: | nobody → N Dillon (sicarie) |
| Changed in openstack-manuals: | |
| status: | Triaged → In Progress |
Revision history for this message
| OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote Fix merged to security-doc (master) | #1 |
| Changed in openstack-manuals: | |
| status: | In Progress → Fix Released |
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Committed: https:/
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master
commit 2d141ac604e62bf
Author: sicarie <email address hidden>
Date: Thu Jul 17 15:02:24 2014 -0700
Squashing 3 small changes, mostly grammatical fixes, sentence structure, and trailing whitespace
Combining two sentences in ch41 and clarifying risk, removing commas in ch41, and changing structure of sentence in ch4, remvoed trailing whitespace
Closes-Bug: #1342331
Closes-Bug: #1342328
Closes-Bug: #1342343
Change-Id: I041c1b640e703f