Chapter 13. Introduction to SSL/TLS in OpenStack Security Guide  - current - simplify sentence

Bug #1342324 reported by Lucas Fisher
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Affects Status Importance Assigned to Milestone
openstack-manuals
Fix Released
Low
KATO Tomoyuki

Bug Description

Section: Certification Authorities, last paragraph

The last sentence is very long and reads better if broken in two. “around creating and signing certificates as such is an area where” -> “around creating and signing certificates. This is an area where”
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Built: 2014-07-15T19:04:52 00:00
git SHA: f7711cc343e504283676dfe43afae6faa9046fd7
URL: http://docs.openstack.org/security-guide/content/introduction-to-ssl-tls.html
source File: file:/home/jenkins/workspace/security-doc-tox-doc-publishdocs/security-guide/ch_introduction-to-ssl-tls.xml
xml:id: introduction-to-ssl-tls

Tags: sec-guide
Tom Fifield (fifieldt)
Changed in openstack-manuals:
status: New → Triaged
importance: Undecided → Low
Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix proposed to security-doc (master)

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/109805

Changed in openstack-manuals:
assignee: nobody → KATO Tomoyuki (kato-tomoyuki)
status: Triaged → In Progress
Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix merged to security-doc (master)

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/109805
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/security-doc/commit/?id=698bfd0c88cf8b51c70c4d009422a1989cc02ef2
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit 698bfd0c88cf8b51c70c4d009422a1989cc02ef2
Author: KATO Tomoyuki <email address hidden>
Date: Sat Jul 26 18:31:38 2014 +0900

    broke the long sentence in two

    Change-Id: I886e321923d3fc24365cc318ecc542aa044e60c4
    Closes-Bug: 1342324

Changed in openstack-manuals:
status: In Progress → Fix Released
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