Grammatical Error - Chapter 1. Acknowledgments in OpenStack Security Guide

[Shellee Aragon]

Incorrect grammatical usage of noun (who) and adjective (these) in the sentence below:

The OpenStack Security Group would like to acknowledge contributions from the following organizations who were instrumental in making this book possible. These are:

Proposed Corrections:

The OpenStack Security Group would like to acknowledge contributions from the following organizations that were instrumental in making this book possible. The organizations are:

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