backup-where.page suggestions

[John Kim]

ORIGINAL:

You should store backup copies of your files somewhere separate from your computer - on an external hard disk, for example.

SUGGESTED:
You should store backup copies of your files somewhere separate from your computer (e.g. an external hard disk).

If this one seems really trivial, see the next suggestion.
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This one is an unordered list.

ORIGINAL:
-Local and remote storage options
USB memory key (low capacity)
Internal disk drive (high capacity)
External hard disk (typically high capacity)
Network-connected drive (high capacity)
File/backup server (high capacity)
Writable CDs or DVDs (low/medium capacity)
Online backup service (Amazon S3 or Ubuntu One, for example; capacity depends on price)

SUGGESTED: *Reorder them by lowest to highest capacity.*
-Local and remote storage options
USB memory key (low capacity)
Writable CDs or DVDs (low/medium capacity)
External hard disk (typically high capacity)
Internal disk drive (high capacity)
Network-connected drive (high capacity)
File/backup server (high capacity)
Online backup service (Amazon S3, Ubuntu One, etc; capacity depends on price)

[Little Girl (littlergirl)]

The first part did seem sort of trivial, but the second one has been fixed and the fix is committed. Thanks for reporting it!